Saturday, July 30, 2011

Book to Movie: Apt Pupil (1998)


Book to Movie: Apt Pupil (1998)
Screenplay by Brandon Boyce
Directed by Brian Singer
Based on the Stephen King novella Apt Pupil first published in Different Seasons

In 1998, Stephen King’s novella from the book, Different Seasons was made into a movie starring Ian McKellan as Arthur Denker/Kurt Dussander and Brad Refro as Todd Bowden.

It was the third and final story from Different Seasons to make its way to the big screen and the least successful of the three.

According to an IMDB contributor, King was so eager to have Bryan Singer direct the picture that he relinquished the rights to the story for just $1.00.

The movie very closely follows King’s story. Like the novella, the movie is exceedingly dark. There are no throw away laugh lines. There are no light moments. From beginning to end, Singer’s film is as dark as King’s darkest works.

There are minor deviations from the story. In the novella, Denker hatches the plan to deceive Todd’s guidance counselor by having Denker pose as Todd’s grandfather. This was an important turning point in the story because this is where Denker explains to Todd that no longer does Todd control Denker’s fate; their fates are entertwined.

In the movie, for no obvious reason, Denker just shows up posing as Todd’s grandfather. Todd is briefly taken aback to find Denker sitting before his guidance counselor before playing along with the ruse.

Usually, Hollywood is wont to add to the body count of story to bring more action to the screen. Boyce’s script actually reduces it. The novella’s narrative takes us through at least two of Denker’s murders and two of Todd’s. While the murdering habits of both are referenced in the movie, the only murder we see outright is the fateful murder that leads to Denker’s heart attack.

Boyce took it upon himself to rewrite the climax of the movie. The reasons for the first part of the rewrite are obvious: to create a palpable tension on screen. In the novella, guidance counselor, Mr. French (played by Friends veteran, David Schwimmer), learns of his deception via a phone call to the boy’s grandfather. If they novella had a weakness, it was the motivation for making this phone call. French made the call because he had nothing better to do with his time that day.

In the movie, he encounters Todd and his parents at his graduation and makes mention of the “rough patch” Todd had gone through years earlier. The parents are obviously confused and Mr. French suspects he’s been had. However, the bell summoning everyone to take their places distracts him from exploring the situation further. The tension here is much more palpable than it was in the novella.

He shows up at Bowden’s door and Todd greets him, just as in the novella. Instead of spraying French’s brains all over the door of his Saab, Todd warns him off, saying, “You have no idea what I’m capable of.” The warning is obviously ominous enough to drive French off. He leaves and that is how Todd’s part of the story ends in the movie.

Denker takes a much different exit than he did in the novella. In King’s story, he overdoses on narcotics he stole from the hospital pharmacy. The ease with which Denker acquired his narcotics in the novella did stretch credibility just a bit because even in the 1970s when King wrote this novella, hospitals very closely guarded their narcotic supplies.

In the movie, Denker commits suicide in a more dramatic and plausible manner. As the authorities are preparing to arrest him and transport him to Israel, he removes his IV tube from the pump and blows into it, causing a massive embolism. Denker’s ashen corpse lying on the hospital bed, with medical personnel working in vain to save him looked like a man who had departed the earth for Hell itself.

McKellan is perfect as Arthur Denker/Kurt Dussander. His countenance makes him look like the physically frail man he was in the story. Yet McKellan brings out the menacing, evil, and dangerous nature of the man within the frail body.

Renfro’s work is average. This is partially Renfro’s fault as he did not seem engaged in the part. The screenwriter also shares in the blame because Todd is not fully or properly developed.

Apt Pupil lost money and was considered a flop. I believe this was mostly due to its dark and ponderous nature. All gore and violence was stripped from the story. As with King’s novella, there was no happy ending, no redemption, and no sympathetic characters. The movie and the story are also haunting for they lie not outside the realm of real life plausibility.

There is one fundamental shift from King’s story and that is Todd’s nature. It is impossible to determine if the shift was deliberate.

Denker, by the fact that he was a member of the SS and had committed atrocities at the concentration camps, was easily established as an evil character. King establishes Todd as a sociopath with his lust for murder on a grander and grander scale. The movie develops Todd very little. There’s nothing to indicate that Boyce was trying to find some redemption in Todd, but Boyce never established Todd’s menacing nature. The fact that Todd almost seemed to be trying to do Mr. French (a Jew) a favor by warning him off, belies what we know about Todd from reading the novella.

Nonetheless, for those of us who enjoy emotionally dark stories, the movie was satisfying, if not nearly as good as King’s novella. A little more effort in developing Todd’s evil nature would have made the movie much better.

Saturday, July 23, 2011

Different Seasons by Stephen King


Different Seasons
By Stephen King
Copyright 1982

By 1982, Stephen King was an established figure in genre fiction with several best selling horror novels to his credit and two movie adaptations that did well at the box office. With Different Seasons, King moved into mainstream fiction with a collection of four novellas. Each novella has a subtitle based on a season and the stories are as different as the seasons themselves. In this book, there is a tale of unflagging hope, of dark loss of innocence, of whimsical yet visceral coming of age, and finally, the story of one woman’s ardent determination in the face of insurmountable odds. Only the last contains any hint of the supernatural and is but a hint. This is King’s first mainstream work.

Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption
Hope Springs Eternal

This story is a first person narrative told by a prison inmate named Red who recounts his thirty year friendship with Andy Dufresne, a fellow inmate in Maine’s Shawshank State Prison.

Red is the consummate institutional man who has adapted well to life behind bars. He’s the man who knows how to get things for his fellow inmates – for a fee.

Andy Dufresne is a bank vice president, tried and convicted of killing his wife and her lover at a remote Maine cottage. Andy is sent to Shawshank to spend the remainder of his years with no hope for parole.

Andy’s quiet nature and refined manner make him an immediate target for prison thugs and a group of homosexuals known as “The Sisters” begin a ruthless campaign of terror and intimidation against him. Andy fights the fight, but usually comes up on the short end.

Andy and Red strike up their friendship when Andy approaches Red and asks him to score him a rock hammer. Andy says he was a bit of a rockhound in his prior life and would like to pick up the hobby again in prison to help pass the time.

Red is concerned that the hammer might be used as a weapon. One of Red’s rules is that he does not score items that can be brandished as weapons. But once the rock hammer is brought to him, he sees that it is harmless. Red and Andy strike up a friendship.

Months later, Andy says he wants Red to smuggle Rita Hayworth – the pinup sensation of that era – into Shawshank. Red says it’s no sweat. A few days later, Andy has a nearly life size poster of Rita Hayworth on the wall of his cell.

One day while Red, Andy, and a couple other inmates are working on a roofing detail, Andy and Red hear one of the guards complaining that the government is going to get a sizeable chunk of an inheritance he has just received. Andy sees an opening and takes a dramatic risk.

He approaches the guard – the toughest and most notorious in the prison – and asks, “Do you love your wife?” Taken aback by Andy’s effrontery, the guard grabs him and pulls him to the edge of the roof. Prepared to toss him over the side, the guard asks Andy to quickly explain himself before dying.

Andy explains how the money can be shielded from taxes through a gift to the guard’s wife. Andy offers to lend his banking and tax expertise to help the guard get it all set up. All he asks in return is beer for himself and his friends as they work on the roof. The guard agrees.

Andy gets the job done. Soon, he’s doing freelance tax and financial work for other prison guards. He’s taken off laundry detail and is put to work in the library which also serves as a makeshift office for him to conduct meetings. He’s given a private cell. Andy crafts the most comfortable life possible for himself in the state prison. Red is in awe of what Andy has accomplished.

Before long, Andy is pressed into service by a corrupt warden. The warden runs a program for inmates to work on various construction projects in the area. He receives kickbacks from contractors not wanting to compete with the cheap prison labor and he cuts corners on supplies and pockets the savings. Andy helps him launder that money.

Andy’s world is rocked when a young, cocky inmate shows up at the prison with an incredible tale. Andy takes the young man, who is intelligent, but immature, under his wing and helps him study for his GED and vocational training. This young man tells Andy and the other inmates of a time he spent in another state prison with a cell mate who bragged of killing a woman and her lover at a remote cabin and letting the woman’s rich banker husband take the fall for the murders.

For the first time since coming to Shawshank nearly a decade earlier, Andy loses his composure. He begs the warden to allow him to get a lawyer to try to get the case reopened. He begs for the one opportunity to salvage his life. The warden, who knows Andy has him by the short hairs, won’t let him do it. He likes Andy right where he is. The young inmate with a tale to tell is sent off to another prison. Andy gets 30 days in solitary for misbehavior.

Andy emerges from solitary a different man. No longer so sure of himself, Red fears that Andy has been broken. Andy tells Red a tale of a remote Maine field bordered by a rock wall. In that field, there is a tree. Under that tree is a rock that has no business being in a Maine farm field. Buried under that rock is the key to a new identity and a new life of financial independence. He also tells Red of a small Mexican coastal town where a man could live out his final days in peace and comfort.

Red tells Andy to stop dreaming and stop hoping. Hope is the most dangerous thing in the world for a man doing life in a state penitentiary, Red counsels. Andy picks up his life as the prison’s financial go to guy, but he is a fundamentally changed man.

The days, weeks, and months pass as they always do inside the prison – days of routine and schedules. Andy goes about his work and Red continues to be the supplier of contraband for the inmates.

One morning, the guards conduct a roll call and find themselves one inmate short. A quick census shows that Andy Dufresne is the inmate missing. An immediate search of the prison grounds and the surrounding territory is launched. Andy’s cell is searched and there is no sign of Andy or his means of escape.

Finally, in frustration, the warden rips down the poster that was once Rita Hayworth, but has been replaced by a succession of pinup girls through the years. Raquel Welch’s likeness is ripped away to reveal a tunnel carved through ten feet of stone to a sewer tunnel. That sewer tunnel travels more than half a mile from the prison before emptying into a river.

Red recounts the search as he heard it from guards and other inmates. As far as Red knows, no trace of Andy was ever found. He was never seen in the area and has not surfaced anywhere. Months later, Red receives a blank post card from a Texas border town. Red believes Andy has just let him know that he’s on the move, on his way to Mexico to live out his life in that coastal town he dreamed of.

A short time later, after 40 years in prison for murder, Red is paroled. He is freed and ends up working in a grocery store. Freedom doesn’t agree with Red. He is an institutional man. On the inside, he’s the guy who can get you things. He’s an important man. On the outside, he’s just a used up old con with no future. He’s depressed, lonely, and contemplating violating his parole to get back on the inside.

Instead, he uses his free time to explore the Maine countryside in search of a field bordered by a rock wall. For months he searches until he finds the field, the tree and the rock that Andy described. Fearful of being caught and more fearful of being disappointed, Red contemplates digging under that rock. Finally, he sets about his excavation. He finds a box that contains a note from Andy telling him if he has come this far, he should go all the way. The box also contains some cash and a clue as to where Andy can be found.

The story ends as Red is sitting in a bus station at the Texas – Mexico border, waiting to cross over to a new life.

Of all of his novels, novellas, and short stories, this is the most uplifting tale Stephen King ever told. King brilliantly employs the first person narrative of an observer to develop Andy Dufresne into one of his most sympathetic characters. The story is dramatic and emotional. The climax is well crafted and the ending delightfully ambiguous. Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption stands as one of King’s finest works bar none.

This story was made into a movie in 1994. The title was shortened to The Shawshank Redemption. It starred Morgan Freeman as Red and Tim Robbins as Andy. While the story centered on just the two principal characters, the move fleshes out tertiary characters to tell the story through the visual medium.

The movie was well received by critics and movie goers. It was so well received it was nominated for seven Oscars and stands as the top movie of all time on the IMDB list of the top 250 movies of all time.

Apt Pupil
Summer of Corruption

As much as Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption is a tale of hope and salvation, Apt Pupil is a tale of darkness with disturbing characters for whom there is no hope and no salvation.

Arthur Denker is a lonely old man living an lonely old man’s existence in a Los Angeles suburb. He shuns contact with other people and spends his days reading, watching movies, and getting quietly drunk in the evening.

He is also a notorious Nazi war criminal. He has been on the run for years, first in Europe, then in South America, now in 1970s suburban America.

His world is rocked when 14 year old Todd Bowden shows up at his door.

Todd Bowden is a dedicated student of the Holocaust. He knows the story, the statistics, and most importantly, the players. He recognizes his neighbor, the lonely Mr. Denker, as the notorious Major Kurt Dussander, the SS’s masterful efficiency expert who was able to garner more stolen treasure from the Jews and more efficiently dispose of their lives in the name of the Final Solution.

Todd comes into Denker’s home and lays out all of his evidence. Denker denies, telling his pat story of not being able to get into the military during the war and serving his time working in the Essex auto works. As Denker tries to sell his false alibi, a bemused Todd tells him the jig is up and he is cornered.

But Todd doesn’t want to be a hero for outing a wanted Nazi. Todd wants history lessons from a man who helped make the most notorious history of the 20th century. He wants to hear all about the camps and the horror – the “gooshy” parts as he calls them. Denker is appalled and sick with dread. Todd has him cornered.

Todd becomes a regular visitor at the Denker residence. Denker tells him tales of his time overseeing interrogations, medical atrocities called experiments, torture, and mass executions. Todd takes it all in just as an apt pupil would.

The relationship is not symbiotic. Neither likes the other. Denker resents the intrusion. Todd is at once appalled and fascinated by what Denker tells him. Their story telling sessions soon drive each of them to darker realms of the human psyche.

One day, Todd shows up at Denker’s home with a present and demands that he open it. To Denker’s horror, Todd has purchased a replica SS uniform, complete with a Death’s Head pin on the cap. Todd orders Denker to put it on. Denker pleads but Todd will not relent. Denker puts on the costume and finds himself transported back to a time when he wore the uniform with pride. Todd orders him to stand at attention and march. Denker dutifully goose steps around the small kitchen, the commands and the movements as automatic to him in the 1970s as they were in the 1940s.

Todd’s parents become curious what their young son is doing spending so much time with the elderly German immigrant. Todd tells them that Mr. Denker is nearly blind and can not see to read. So Todd has been reading to him. His parents are proud of their charitable, caring son.

Denker begins having horrible nightmares of the ghosts of the past chasing him, cornering him in the death camp, Patin, that he commanded. He finds that sleeping in the SS uniform helps keep the dreams at bay.

Todd is also having nightmares. He can’t sleep. The lack of sleep and the hours he spends passing the time with Denker take a toll on his grades. His parents are alarmed when their straight A student comes home with C’s and D’s on his report card. Todd promises he’ll do better. But the next report card is even more alarming with D’s and F’s. Todd knows he’s in trouble. As Todd plaintively relates his plight to Denker, Denker recognizes that Todd’s trouble is his trouble because if the real reason for Todd’s academic slide is uncovered, he is curtains.

Denker hatches a plan. He reports to Todd’s guidance counselor, Mr. French, posing as Todd’s grandfather. He tells the grandfather a tale of a Bowden home asunder and an innocent boy caught in the middle. Todd’s mom drinks, Denker tells French. The father is often absent and when he’s there, he does nothing but fight with his wife.

Denker promises to take his young grandson under his wing and work with him to get his grades up and make him the apt pupil he once was. A sympathetic Mr. French agrees to let Todd put things right before his academic record is damaged.

Denker makes good on his promise. He has Todd over nightly and drives him in his studies. Todd is bitter and resentful of Denker’s constant prodding, but it works. Todd’s grades climb back to their normal, stellar levels.

But Todd has other problems. He has developed sexual dysfunction at a time when his hormones ought to be kicking his sex drive into high gear. He also finds himself enamored with killing. He begins to seek out homeless people at remote locations and murdering them with hammers, axes, and knives.

Denker also finds himself lusting to kill as he once did. He starts by capturing a stray cat and baking it in the oven. He quickly graduates to bringing home transients and alcoholics to murder them and bury them in his cellar.

One night, after Dinker has just finished a dreadfully difficult murder in his kitchen, he suffers a heart attack. He is physically unable to move the body, let alone bury it. He calls Todd for help.

Todd tells his parents that Mr. Denker has just received a letter from Germany and is quite anxious to hear its details. He rushes over to Denker’s house and squares it away, burying the dead man in the cellar with the other bodies. Todd calls 911 then tells Denker they are quits. Denker assures them that they are not. As much as Todd once had Denker trapped, Denker now has Todd trapped. He has known that Denker is actually Dussander for years. If and when the authorities discover Denker’s true identity, they are going to take a strong interest in young Todd Bowden’s relationship with the fugitive Nazi.

Denker is taken to the hospital and placed in ICU. Todd’s parents compliment him on his quick and decisive action in the crisis. After Denker is taken out, Todd’s dad notes the two or three page letter written in German laying on the kitchen table, having been retrieved from Denker’s bedroom and placed there by Todd as a prop. Later that night, Todd returns to Denker’s home and puts that letter back in its hiding place.

As Denker is convalescing and recovering from his heart attack, he is soon joined by a roommate. Morris Heisel is also an immigrant to the United States and about Denker’s age. Heisel was imprisoned in the Patin concentration camp where his wife and children were put to death. The years have taken a physical toll on Denker and Heisel does not immediately recognize him as the camp commandant from all those years ago. They pass the days with conversation.

Todd is getting ready to graduate. He will be his class salutatorian. He has a bright and promising future, but can’t rid himself of his dark emotions or his dark activities. He continues to kill and starts contemplating highway sniping with his new .30.30 rifle.

Mr. French hasn’t forgotten Todd and his grandfather who came to him four years ago in crisis and how the grandfather was able to help get the studious Todd Bowden back on track. He looks up the old man in the phone book to call and congratulate him on the work he did to get Todd through a rough time in his life. The elderly Mr. Bowden answers, but has no idea what French is talking about. Mr. French suspects he’s been had, and resolves to investigate the matter.

Back at the hospital, Denker is regaining his strength and the charm he once exhibited as a proud Nazi. He woos the nurses and they are endeared to him. One evening, a nurse excitedly tells Denker and Heisel that her boyfriend has proposed to her. Denker says he wants to hear the whole story. “Tell us everything,” he says. “Omit nothing.”

That phrase triggers Heisel’s memory. He’s heard it before. He remembers that he heard it from an SS officer who was preparing to interrogate him. He stares deeply at Denker as he listens to the nurse go on about her marriage proposal. He summons the image of that Nazi officer from years past and realizes who lies in the bed next to him. He contacts the authorities.

Later that evening, Denker awakens to find an FBI agent and an agent of the Israeli government standing at his bed. He is under arrest for being the war criminal Kurt Dussander. When he is well enough to travel, he will be transported to Israel where he will stand trial.

For Kurt Dussander, his years of running from justice are finally over.

Just as Denker promised, the authorities do take an interest in Todd Bowden. They question him about Denker’s habits and acquaintances. They also ask him about the mysterious letter Denker received the night he had his heart attack. Todd’s dad says he recalls seeing the letter on the kitchen table. A search of Denker’s home reveals the bodies of several dead men buried in the cellar and some very old correspondence written in German, but the letter in question can not be found. Todd has no explanation. The investigators politely end the questioning and leave, convinced that Todd Bowden has known for years that the notorious Kurt Dussander has been his neighbor and confidant.

Dussander is getting stronger and soon will be deported to stand trial. He will not let the Jews decide his fate. One evening, he slips from his bed and sneaks into a drug supply closet where he steals a lethal dose of narcotics. He downs the pills and dies a peaceful death in the hospital, eluding his worldly pursuers and going on to face God’s judgment for a lifetime of evil.

Meanwhile, Todd Bowden finds Mr. French at his door. French wants to know who that man was and what happened all those years ago. Todd answers by flowing French’s head off, leaving his gray matter splattered all over his Saab coupe.

He then goes to a secluded area of trees near the freeway and mayhem ensues. It is four hours before police can take him down.

Stephen King has written about monsters who devour children, plagues that wipe out humanity, children and adults manipulated by malevolent forces to commit horrendous evils upon their fellow man. But he’s never written a darker tale than Apt Pupil.

Each of King’s novels and stories contain some heroic element. Somebody is always the hero, even if the story does not have a happy ending. In Apt Pupil, there are no heroes, only evil. Neither Dussander nor Bowden find redemption, nor are they worthy of it. Apt Pupil is not tragic in that Todd Bowden was corrupted by evil. Indeed, Bowden sought out that evil and was the apt pupil who sought the secrets of true evil. He was not only a willing participant, he was the instigator.

There are no light moments in this story. No throw away laugh lines are found. Neither Todd Bowden nor Kurt Dussander have a single redeeming quality. There is only evil in this story.

Apt Pupil was made into a movie in 1998. It received mixed reviews and lost money at the box office. It was nearly a straight retelling of the King novella. Without a hero, without redemption, and without a happy or dramatic ending, mainstream movie goers were turned off.

Apt Pupil is not as recognized as other tales from this book such as Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption and The Body which was made into a fantastic movie called Stand By Me. This is because the mainstream public came to know the stories through the movies. Apt Pupil may not have made for a good movie, but it stands as perhaps the most emotionally powerful tale in Different Seasons and in King’s body of work.

In short, it is a masterpiece of dark drama.

The Body
Fall from Innocence

The Body is a delightful mix of childhood whimsy and dark childhood fears woven together into a coming of age story. According to King, he drew upon childhood acquaintances and events from his own childhood to develop this fantastic story that reveals how, as young boys evolve into adolescents, the emotional changes they go through changes every facet of their lives – especially the people they call friends.

The story is told in first person narrative with the author recounting the events many years later.

The story centers around Gordon LaChance, a 12 year old boy who enjoys writing stories and has three pals with whom he passes his lazy summer days. Gordy relies on these friends for emotional support and affirmation because at home, he is a ghost. His parents, grief stricken over the death of Gordy’s older brother who was a football hero and popular high school student, have nearly dismissed Gordy from their lives.

Gordy’s best buddy is Chris Chambers. Chris Chambers comes from the wrong part of town. He has a last name that is equated by everyone in Castle Rock with failure and trouble. His father is a drunk. His mother is a drunk, and his older brother a hood. Yet Chris perseveres, doing his best to get by with his social baggage.

Gordy and Chris are reading comic books in their tree house with their friend, Teddy Duchamp, reading comic books when the fourth in their quartet, Vern Tessio bursts in and tells him he knows where there is a dead body. He asks if they want to go see it.

Tessio has learned about the boy’s body by overhearing a conversation his older brother was having with a buddy. The two had stolen a car the night before and had taken a couple girls down a remote country road that came out near some railroad tracks. There, they discovered the body of 12 year old Ray Brower who was reported missing by his parents after setting off to pick blueberries. It is obvious that, at some point, Brower got hit by a train and flung into the nearby woods.

The authorities are conducting a search for Brower, but the elder Tessio can’t tell the police what they were doing out on that remote road with a stolen car. Brower’s body seems doomed to spend years undiscovered.

The boys make plans to establish false alibis for the night and set off down the railroad tracks to a neighboring town to see the body. At first, they are excited, then Gordy reminds them that perhaps they should not be excited. He reminds them that a boy, a boy just like them, is dead. What they are doing is somber. They want to be heroes for finding the missing boy, but Gordy reminds them that they should not enjoy the process.

As they start their journey, we learn more about each of the boys and their relationships with each other. Teddy Dechamp is not too bright and he is disfigured, having an ear burned off. His father, in a fit of anger, held Teddy’s head to a stove burner, earning him a trip to an insane asylum.

Tessio is not terribly bright and is socially and physically awkward and a bit of a coward. He learned of the body because he was under his parents porch, searching in futility for a jar of pennies he’d buried days before. He was able to listen to his brother’s conversation from the seclusion of that porch.

Chris Chambers is smart, tough, but instinctively a peace maker. He hates conflict and always steps in to break up arguments. Despite his intelligence, he knows he’s doomed by his family name. Nobody will ever take him seriously because of his last name.

The four set off down the tracks and pause by the town junkyard to refill canteens from the pump there. Gordy is elected to travel across the dump to a grocery store in town to buy supplies. As he’s making the return journey, the dump’s keeper sees Gordy and sets his vicious dog, known as Choppers, lose on Gordy. Gordy sprints to the fence and makes it over just in time to avoid being devoured by the dog.

However, from the safety of the fence, Gordy discovers that the dog, well known as a hulking beast capable of devouring children whole, is really just an average, run of the mill mutt with a bad attitude.

The boys start taunting the dog and the junkyard manager starts berating them and promising to call the cops on them. He knows each of them and identifies them by name. Then he zeroes in on Duchamp, telling him he’s “the loony’s boy.” Teddy is enraged, screaming that his father stormed the beach at Normandy and he is a hero. The old man goes on taunting Teddy until he breaks down crying. The other boys lead him away, with Chris reassuring Teddy that the old man is a fat loser while Teddy’s dad is a war hero.

As they continue down the tracks, Teddy and Vern move ahead and carry on their own private conversation. Chris and Gordy also have a chance to talk and Chris awakens Gordy to some of the hard realities of life that they are going to confront.

Gordy, Chris tells him, will soon be moving on with his life in a different direction than the rest of them. He’s smart and does well in school. He’ll go onto the college classes. Teddy and Vern, with their intellectual limitations will fall into the vocational programs. Chris will be there with them because there’s no way the school is going to allow a Chambers kid to take college classes.

Gordy dismisses it, saying he’ll be there in the vocational classes with his buddies. Chris tells him he’s an idiot for letting his friends drag him down and destroy his future.

The kids cross a train bridge and Gordy and Vern are nearly run down as Gordy panics and can’t run on the railroad ties. Gordy, rather than abandon his friend, stays behind him, pushing him, coaxing him, and cursing him until they reach an area over land and leap from the tracks just in time.

That night, the kids move off the tracks and camp for the night. After dinner, the boys all want Gordy to tell them a story. They all enjoy hearing Gordy’s stories so he tells them a humorous revenge tale of an obese boy who gets back at all of his tormentors by entering a pie eating contest and then puking all over the stage, causing everyone else on the stage and in the audience to puke.

This is an interesting diversion in the story because King pauses to write the story himself rather than abridge the tale and write it as dialogue coming from Gordy. It is set in a different font in the book and is a story within a story.

We see Teddy’s intellectual limitations come to the fore as he demands to know what happened to the kid after the contest. Did he get in trouble? What did they do to him? People who enjoy a good story and are gifted with imagination don’t need an author to bring the story all the way to conclusion. Teddy’s not that gifted. His imagination won’t stretch beyond what Gordy has told him, and he finds the tale unsatisfying.

There are bits of humor mixed into the story as they wind their way down the tracks toward their ultimate goal. They stop to swim in a pool created by a beaver dam. As they are swimming, Chris notices that Vern has leaches on him. They all run out of the water, naked, screaming, and covered with leaches. In their panic, they start pulling off the leaches and pulling them from each other. Then Gordy finds that he has a leach attached to his scrotum. He’s terrified beyond speech. He slowly removes the leach, covered in blood drawn from his most delicate parts, and faints.

While Gordy an his buddies proceed on foot toward Brower’s body, Vern’s brother shares his story with his hood buddies, Ace Merrill and “Eyeball” Chambers – Chris’ older brother nicknamed thus because of a deformed eye. They hop in their cars and head off to “discover” the bodies and become heroes.

Gordy and his pals see the country road off the tracks and head for the woods. There, they find the broken body of Ray Brower. He is lying on the ground, “knocked out of his Keds by the train that hit him,” as our narrator puts it. They stand there and ponder their own mortality at age 12 briefly before Chris orders them to gather sticks to build a litter so they can haul the body out.

Just as they are doing this, Ace Merrill and his thug buddies show up in their car and tell the boys the body is theirs and they are going to claim the credit. Merrill whips out a switchblade and tells the boys to go home.

With too much invested, both emotionally and physically, in the quest to claim Ray Brower’s body, the boys refuse. Merrill advances with intent of doing bodily harm. Vern and Teddy flee in terror. Gordy stares down Merrill has he advances, waving the blade. Just then, Chris produces a gun from his backpack and fires a shot into the air. Merrill, momentarily distracted, halts.

He tells Chris to give up the gun and go home, saying he doesn’t have the guts to shoot a groundhog. Chris responds by shooting again, this time at Merrill’s feet. Ace knows he’s out gunned and backs off. He and his buddies leave, promising harsh retribution for each of them.

Having confronted their own mortality once again, this time at the tip of Ace Merrill’s switch blade, their lust for heroic recognition abates. Ray Brower was a kid, just like them. They should reap no reward for finding him. They resolve to make an anonymous phone call when they get home. They then set off for the journey home.

They make their anonymous phone call and Ray Brower’s body is found. Gordy then tells us that Chris’ predictions almost all come true. As they start junior high the next year, Teddy and Vern fall in with the vocational class crowd. They drift apart. Soon, they become nodding acquaintances in the hallway at school.

Chris’ dire predictions of his own future didn’t play out the way he foresaw. He did enroll in the college courses, much to the chagrin of his teachers. He worked hard and made the grade and went on to college.

However, Chris would meet an unhappy end. While he was in college, he was in a fast food restaurant when an argument erupted between two customers in line in front of him. Always the peace maker, Chris stepped forward to try to break it up. His reward was a knife in the throat that killed him.

Teddy and Vern also met unhappy endings. Vern Tessio was killed in an apartment fire in a slum in Brooklyn. Teddy died drunk behind the wheel of a car, taking several people with him.

Gordy went on to be a famous horror writer. He looked back on that walk down the tracks from Castle Rock to Chamberlein as a seminal time in his life. He looked back on those three friends and remarks that the best friends he ever had were the ones he had when he was 12.

This story resonated with me on a personal and emotional level, as I’m sure it did with many boys who grew up in rural parts of the country. Near my home were railroad tracks that my buddies and I walked, fishing poles and tackle boxes in hand, talking about the things 12 year old boys talk about in the language unique to 12 year old boys.

I, too, had close friends when I was 12 who had difficult home lives. I was a bookish kid, in the band, socially and physically awkward. I grew up in a blue collar neighborhood where many of my friends went on to vocational pursuits while I pursued academics. They were tough guys. I was their geeky friend. Sometimes they picked on me and abused me. But they were always there for me in a fight or when I just when I wanted to hang out and do the mischievous and sometimes dangerous things twelve year old boys are wont to do.

Such is the magic of this story. It is hard for any man to read it and not see himself and his friends in its characters. Although it was set in 1960 and my own idyllic pre-adolescent years were the late 1970s, It could have been a story about me and my friends.

The Body is a character study. King wrote few character studies. His most developed character study was Gerald’s Game which isn’t even worthy of mention in the same sentence with this story. Stephen King is a teller of tales, not a writer of character studies. But like every other story in this book, King leaves his comfort zone and achieves greatness.

As I noted above, The Body was made into a movie in 1986 that starred the late River Phoenix, Will Wheaton, Corey Feldman, and Jerry O'Connell. It was retitled Stand By Me with the iconic song serving as theme song. The movie was critically acclaimed and was Rob Reiner's breakthrough movie. It was the breakthrough movie for the child actors who starred in it as well.

The movie deviates from the story in certain places and has a different beginning and ending that serve the first person narrative of the story on the big screen, but is otherwise a straight retelling of King's wonderful tale.

After reading Apt Pupil, this story leaves the reader at once emotionally lifted, yet slightly melancholy for days when we were twelve and we had the best friends we would ever have.

The Breathing Method
A Winter’s Tale

The Breathing Method is two stories within one narrative and while it is probably the weakest tale in a compilation of brilliantly written stories, it is a fine story well worth reading.

A middle-aged lawyer is invited by a partner in his firm to join him at a private men’s club in midtown Manhattan. He goes to the club and finds a group of men in a dark paneled, dimly lit room enjoying drinks and cigars. He is invited to join them. He sits, observing the obviously wealthy men as they banter and chat before getting down to business. Their business is telling stories.

As the man prepares to leave the club, he is told he is welcome to drop by anytime. Don’t stand on invitation, he is told by his boss, because he won’t get another one. If he does not come again, he is welcome to dismiss himself.

The next day at work, the partner treats him just as he always has – as a subordinate hardly worth his time. The man is puzzled and a little upset, hoping the invitation to the club would translate into professional advancement. He decides he won’t be going back to the club.

A few months later, as Christmas nears, he decides he will go back. He is worried as he travels to midtown, worried that his long absence or his lower social status will lead the members to dismiss him. However, he is warmly greeted by the butler and led into the club where his boss and the other men are gathered. He is greeted warmly and welcomed back into the group. The banter goes on for awhile before a doctor among them says he has a tale he’d like to tell. He launches into his tale. . .

As a young doctor, he’d set up a practice in Manhattan in the 1930s. One day, a young woman showed up for an examination. She was pregnant and wore no wedding ring. In those days, young pregnant women were pariahs shunned to live in seclusion until their “problem” was gone.

This woman was determined to go forward with her life as a salesperson as long as she was able. Like many women in New York, she had aspired to be an actress, but was working at a department store to make ends meet. Her boyfriend got her pregnant. After promising to take care of her and do the honorable thing, he split, leaving her in a jam.

The doctor immediately came to admire the woman’s determination and resolve. He agreed to be her physician and see her through her pregnancy. She insisted on paying him in advance for his services and produced cash to pay. The doctor’s disapproving nurse took the money and set the appointments.

As was to be expected, when her pregnancy started to show, she was fired from her job. She was evicted from her boarding house. In Depression era New York, this would have been daunting for the hardiest soul. But the woman, she told her doctor, had secured work and lodging from a blind woman as a caretaker. The blind woman remained unaware of her condition.

As the doctor prepared her for her eventual delivery, he produced a pamphlet that described what he called “The Breathing Method” for working through labor. Today, the doctor says, we call it Lamaze. He assured her it would help with her delivery. The young woman assured him that he enjoyed her complete trust and she would read and practice the technique.

As her due date grew nearer, the doctor and his patient developed a strong bond of respect and friendship. She scrupulously followed his direction and was a model patient.

The night she went into labor, New York was in the grips of an ice storm. She summoned a cab who started inching its way through the storm to the hospital. The doctor was at the hospital waiting. She commenced the Breathing Method in the cab.

As her labor grew more intense, the cabbie started to panic. He darted through traffic and hit the accelerator. He lost control of the cab and it collided with a statue in front of the hospital. The doctor rushed out to find his patient was decapitated in the accident.

Yet, her chest continued to rise and fall in regular rhythm prescribed in the breathing method whilst her head rested several yards away. The hospital staff stood around, stunned by the accident. The doctor ordered them to get blankets while he proceeded with the delivery.

The woman pushed and breathed, pushed and breathed, until she birthed a healthy baby boy. Once the baby was out of her, her breaths slowed and eventually stopped. Her sheer will and determination to have the child, the doctor said, allowed her to keep herself alive, sans head, long enough to give birth.

At the conclusion of the tale, everybody passes their Christmas gratuity to the ever present butler and makes their way out. Our narrator pauses to ask a question. He senses that questions are not welcomed at the club. But he asks anyway. He asks what is upstairs of the club.

Many rooms, the butler tells him. So many rooms, that a man may get lost and never find his way out. He is presented with his coat. The butler all of a sudden looks ominous, if not threatening. The narrator decides that perhaps the rest of his questions are better left unasked and he makes his way home.

When I first read this story more than 20 years ago, I was enchanted with the idea of a darkly paneled, dimly lit club where stories were told by fireside while the participants sipped brandy (or, in my case, scotch) and listened to macabre tales. Today, I belong to a book club where we discuss books, sip scotch, smoke cigars, and discuss stories, if not tell them. We meet once a month in various homes and occasionally at a cigar store.

I also belong to a much smaller (just five of us) group who meet every Friday at a friend’s apartment to sip scotch, smoke cigars, talk about various books (as opposed to the book of the month) and watch and discuss movies. Just as in King’s group, we each suggest and contribute movie suggestions.

Not quite what King brings us in this story, but close enough to make me feel like I’m lucky to have as many friends as I do who share my love of stories – be they stories from books or stories from movies.

The story is dedicated to fellow horror writer, Peter Straub with whom King was collaborating on The Talisman. King's exclusive club very much resembles Straub's Chowder Society from his novel Ghost Story. King never says, but one can't help but think perhaps the story was a homage to what many regard as Straub's best novel.

King wraps up Different Seasons with a narrative account of how each story came into being. Each story was written in a brief period between books. The Body was written immediately after the completion of ‘Salem’s Lot. Apt Pupil was written after The Shining was put to bed. Rita Hayworth and the Shawshank Redemption was penned after the Dead Zone was shipped to his publisher, and The Breathing Method followed the writing of Firestarter.

He goes on to mourn the loss of the serialized novella that passed when the pulp magazines that used to publish novellas in a serialized format passed away. These stories went unpublished for so long, King says, because there was no market for them.

He also discusses his agent’s fear of being typed as a horror writer. Back then (and to some degree, today) horror writers were not taken seriously as writers. King looked back at the writers he admired in his youth – writers like Shirley Jackson, H.P. Lovecraft, Clark Ashton Smith, and Ray Bradbury and decided he didn’t mind being typed with that fraternity of great writers.

So, here concludes my review of Stephen King’s first published mainstream stories. With the movies being made more than 10 years after its publication, the book has grown in stature and is now recognized as one of King’s finest works – as it should be.

As for the King's town of Castle Rock, The Body is the only story in these books set there. The character, Ace Merrill is introduced here and will figure as a prominent character in the next King book set in Castle Rock, The Dark Half.

Saturday, July 16, 2011

The Policy by Bentley Little


The Policy
By Bentley Little
Copyright 2003

Bentley Little writes books as if he has axes to grind with the subject at hand. I’ve read a few of his books where he takes the absurdities of ordinary institutions and melds them into fantastical horror scenarios. In The Town, it was small town government. In The Association, it was homeowners associations. In The Policy, his beef is with insurance companies.

Hunt Jackson is an unemployed tech specialist, recently divorced, and living in Los Angeles. He decides to break with the grind of southern California and head back to his hometown of Tuscon, AZ.

He looks up some of his old buddies and finds that a friend from junior high school, Joel McCain. They hook up and renew their old friendship. It isn’t long before Joel and his wife find a girlfriend for Hunt. Hunt meets Beth and before long the two fall in love.

Hunt travels back to California to gather his furniture and belongings and transport them back to Tuscon. He stays the night in his old apartment and when he wakes up in the morning, he finds that the windshield of his car is cracked. So, he calls his insurance company.

He finds out that his insurance company has been acquired by another larger insurance company. When he talks to the adjustor on the phone, the adjustor says the time of the accident occurred, “Half past a monkey’s ass and a quarter past his balls.” Joel is taken aback and asks to speak to the adjustor’s supervisor. The line goes dead, so Hunt calls back and gets a courteous woman who is able to help him get his claim underway. She has no explanation for the prior adjustor’s behavior. Before hanging up, she suggests he look into renter’s insurance because you never know what can happen.

Hunt soon finds work with a tree trimming crew in Tuscon city government. One evening, while he is out, his apartment is broken into. His furniture and belongings are trashed. He calls his insurance company to file a claim and he is promised that his home will be repaired and his belongings replaced. He decides to spend the night with his girlfriend.

Meanwhile, Little injects a short chapter of a man who has an earthquake isolated under his home. While his home lies in shambles, no other home in the area is affected. The man laments not buying the earthquake insurance that his agent recommended, even though they don’t have earthquakes in Tuscon.

Joel returns to his apartment to find repairs have been made and possessions replaced. However, the work is not to his liking. The walls are painted black. His bed is replaced by a water bed shaped like a penis. His movies are replaced by pornography and his music collection is multiple CDs of Debbie Boone’s “You Light Up My Life.”

It’s not long before Hunt is approached by an insurance salesman offering him better renter’s insurance, but he decides to move in with Beth.

Soon after they move in, they are hounded by an insurance agent who wants to sell them life insurance, homeowner’s insurance, health insurance, and unemployment insurance. The unemployment insurance actually guarantees that neither he nor Beth can lose their job. They decline.

Other members of Hunt’s circle of friends and acquaintances are also hounded. Hunt’s supervisor turns down the homeowner’s insurance and the edition he is trying to build on his home is repeatedly knocked down by freakish accidents.

The insurance salesman continues to show up and force his way into their home. He offers Hunt a policy that will insure against arrest. Hunt laughs at the agent and throws him out. Just days later, he is arrested for molesting a child in the neighborhood. While in jail, the insurance man visits and offers him insurance against being convicted. Desperate to be out of jail and clear of the charges, Hunt jumps at the policy. The next day, the little girl who was his accuser is killed by a hit and run driver and all of the video tapes of her statement disappear.

Hunt’s friends have similarly bizarre occurrences. His friend, Jorge and his wife are expecting a baby. They have health insurance through his job, so they don’t purchase the insurance from this bizarre insurance agent or his company simply known as “The Insurance Group.” When the time comes for the baby to be delivered, the hospital will not admit his wife, saying that his insurance requires her to go to another hospital. She is taken to a hospital that is virtually empty of patients. She expects to deliver a boy. The child is delivered and whisked away. Moments later, the doctor returns and states “Here is your daughter!” The little boy’s penis has been cut off.

Soon, Hunt and his friends are intimidated into buying whatever bizarre insurance this agent offers. Hunt purchases the good neighbor rider on his homeowners insurance and when his next door neighbor starts to hassle him, the neighbor’s house is burned to the ground. When he purchases the employment insurance, the people in city government who are trying to outsource his job are caught in an embarrassing scandal and the supervisor dies in an accident.

Hunt and his friends decide to find out what’s behind this insurance company that wields such power and influence and acts with malice and immorality. Hunt’s search takes him to a partially collapsed building in a remote part of town where they encounter the insurance agent. Hunt has an inspired idea.

He wants to purchase the mother of all life insurance polices – the policy that guarantees immortality. The agent is thrilled! It will be expensive, the agent tells him, but well worth every penny. The agent has such a policy himself. Hunt signs his name to the policy.

But they find out that the Tuscon office is just a branch office. More research leads them to Mexico. Hunt, Joel, and Jorge, along with their spouses, travel to Mexico determined to find this agent’s life insurance policy and destroy it.

Through the help of some locals, they are able to locate the home office which is way out in the middle of nowhere. There, they find offices maintained by nameless, faceless beings who do not notice their presence. Eventually, they find the file room. It includes maps and documents that show that this insurance company helped topple Rome because it was behind on its payments. It had a hand in defeating Napoleon because he had not purchased insurance. They also find the agent’s policy, etched in runes they don’t understand. They destroy the stone tablets. But the agent lives.

Hunt figures out that for the policy to be null and void, all copies must be destroyed and the agent would certainly have a copy of his own. They find their agent’s office in the complex and find his policy. The agent shows up, but too late. Joel takes a match to the policy and the agent dies. They are free of the menace of the Insurance Group.

This book was exciting and intriguing for the first three quarters. Little builds the tension and suspense nicely with each twist to the insurance racket. But the ending was so woefully bad that I ended up not liking the book at all.

The trip to Mexico and the absurdity of these ancient beings working in an office in the desert stretched credibility too far. He should have written a better ending when Hunt found the Tuscon office.

There were also red herrings and other occurrences that were put forth several times, but then never explained. Hunt and Beth were certain that their spare bedroom was haunted. They saw reflections in the mirror. They heard noises like wood striking wood. This was left as a loose end. We never get to find out who or what was in the spare bedroom or why.

Also, the men who were responsible for enforcing the policies were described as men who wore trench coats and fedora hats. We never get a hint at who or what these men were or what their motivation was.

This is the fourth of Little’s books I’ve read. The first three were compelling, well plotted books from beginning to the end. This one just veers off into absurdity near the end and leaves too much unresolved. I would recommend Bentley Little to anyone who enjoys horror, but I would caution them against reading The Policy. The ending is just too poor, leaving the reader completely unsatisfied after being led through more than 300 pages of exciting and riveting horror.

Wednesday, July 13, 2011

The Illearth War


The Chronicles of Thomas Covenant the Unbeliever Volume II
The Illearth War
Copyright 1977

The Illearth War picks up where Lord Foul’s Bane ended. Thomas Covenant has returned to Haven Farm in a daze, still trying to determine if what he experienced in the Land was a dream or real. Determined to keep his mental discipline that he needs to keep him alive as a leper, he resolves that it was all his imagination.

His trip into town has earned him the anger of the townspeople. He gets hate mail and experiences vandalism and threatening phone calls. Defiant, he decides to venture out into society once again. This time, he decides to go to a neighboring town for a drink at a nightclub.

He hitches a ride from a trucker and gets to the club. As he’s watching the singer prepare to do her act, she recognizes him as her old friend, Berek. When the lights go up and people see him, someone recognizes him. He is run out of the club.

As he’s walking home, the local sheriff picks him up and takes him home. The sheriff tells him to stay on his farm and away from “decent” folk.

As Covenant chews on his anger, he notices that the stables behind his home are ablaze – obviously the work of some vandal. As he is pondering what to do about this, his phone rings. He answers to find out it is his ex-wife, Joan. Joan misses him, she tells Covenant. She wants to reconnect.

Covenant wants to respond, but can’t. He’s swept by a wave of dizziness. As he hears Joan’s plaintiff cries for him to say something, he falls unconscious, striking his head on the coffee table.

He awakens in a place familiar to him. It is the Close of Revelstone where the lords of Revelstone hold council. He recognizes his friend, Mhoram who has aged dramatically. Covenant finds that 40 years have passed since he left the land.

The new High Lord is Elena and it is she who, using the Staff of Law that he helped recover, who has summoned him. Lord Foul’s army is on the move and she wants Covenant to use his white gold in defense of the Land.

Covenant also learns that the Lords have appointed a new Warmark. A man named Hile Troy who comes from Covenant’s world. Born blind, he once served as a Pentagon battle tactician. He fell from a burning building and ended up in the Land. It is he who is making preparations for the defense of the Land.

Covenant is escorted by his former bodyguard, the Bloodguard Bannor to a chamber where he freshens up. He is then summoned to the chamber of the High Lord Elena. He is horrified to learn that Elena is the daugher of Lena, the girl he ravished when he first arrived in the Land.
Elena tells Covenant that the Ranyhyn kept the promise they made to Covenant in the Plains of Ra years before. The Ranyhyn – glorious steeds who pick their riders – had reared to Covenant out of fear and loathing. Covenant promised not to ride the Ranyhyn if they would, once a year, visit Lena who dreamed of seeing and riding Ranyhyn. Elena was selected by the Ranyhyn to ride at a very young age, marking her as one strong in earth power.

She presents to Covenant a sword called the Krill which was wielded by Loric Vilesilencer, son of Berek Halfhand, and asks him to use it. In a fit of pique, Covenant drives it into the stone table of the High Lord’s chambers. Once impaled in the stone, it can not be removed.

Shortly after the Krill is driven into the stone, a strange visitor arrives in the Close. A spritely man who calls himself Amok tells the Lords that the conditions have been met for him to arrive and share his knowledge if they ask the right questions. But he frustrates them with non answers as they ask question after question. Eventually deciding that his summoning, triggered by driving the Krill into stone, was a mistake, he leaves them.

While preparations are underway to move the army, Elena invites Covenant to join her at an enchanted lake near the peak of Revelstone. Covenant slips into the cold water and can feel its invigorating effects. In an uncharacteristic mood of playfulness, Covenant swims with Elena and they start dunking each other. While underwater, Elena kisses Covenant passionately. He is appalled that this young daughter of the woman he raped 40 years prior is attracted to him. Already bitter and wary, he becomes more so.

On his way back to his chambers, Covenant has a chance meeting with Trell, Lena’s father and Elena’s grandfather. Trell’s wife, Atiara, who led Covenant to Revelstone despite Covenant’s crimes against her daughter, died a powerless and heartbroken woman. Trell is distraught and angry when he sees Covenant. Violating his oath of peace, he launches himself at Covenant and nearly kills him before Bannor can subdue him. Now Trell, already a pitiful creature, is a broken man, having violated the oath of peace he swore to live by. Covenant sees it as more blood on his hands.

Meanwhile, Hile Troy prepares the army of the Lords to march. They will first go to Revelwood which has been regrown from new trees after being destroyed by Foul’s minions 40 years before. From there, they will head south for Doom’s Retreat where they will meet Lord Foul’s Army. Doom’s Retreat has traditionally been the place where routed armies flee for a final defense, but Troy sees it as the most defensible place in the Land.

The army, lead by the High Lord and Lord Mhoram set forth from Revelstone and travel to Revelwood. There, they determine that they need to make contact with the Giants, from whom they’ve not heard in many years, to enlist their aid. They also send a scouting party to find Lord Foul’s army and determine its size.

While at Revelwood, Covenant notices that there is a distortion in the air that moves about. The Bloodguard pounce and it turns out to be Amok who had accompanied the army from Revelstone while invisible. He confesses that he is the way to the seventh ward of Kevin’s Lore.

Desperate to find anything that will aid the Land’s army in their war, Elena states that she and Covenant, along with their accompanying Bloodguard, will travel with Amok to Earthroot which lies beneath Melenkurion Skyweir – the highest summit in the land and reportedly the source of all earth power. Lord Mhoram and Hile Troy will lead the army to Doom’s Retreat and prepare for war.

As Mhoram and Troy move the army south, the scouts from Seasearch return to tell a horrific tale. All of the Giants have been slain. They died in their homes with their heads split open. They found one Giant alive who was responsible for the slaughter. He was one of the three Ravers – the most powerful servants of Lord Foul. His name is Kinslayer and he wielded a piece of the Illearth Stone as he tormented and destroyed the Giants. He allowed the party to return so they could tell the lords that resistance was futile against such might.

The scouting party that sought Lord Foul’s army also returns to tell Mhoram and Troy that a Giant rides at the head of the army of ur-viles and cavewights. He, too, wields a piece of the Illearth Stone.

Troy now knows that the army at Doom’s Retreat doesn’t stand a chance. As Foul’s army approaches, they retreat further into the canyon until the reach the Garroting Deep – a forest under the control of a powerful being called a Forestal known as Caerroil Wildwood. To enter the Garroting Deep is to meet with certain death.

Mhoram shouts into the forest trying to summon the Forestal. He tells them that the enemies of the Land are his enemies as well. He begs for passage of the army through his forest.

Caerriol Wildwood arrives and tells him that all sentient beings are enemies of the forest, recalling a time when men felled the trees of the once great forest that covered the Land. Troy is desperate to save his plan. He tells Wildwood that he’ll do anything to save his army if only the Forestal will help them in their cause. The Forestal accepts and allows them to enter.

Meanwhile, Covenant and Elena journey east toward Melenkurion Skyweir. Along the way, Elena repeatedly questions Amok who continually responds with riddles and non-answers. Frustrated, she does not see how Amok can be of service to them.

One night, while camped, Covenant is talking to Elena. He learns that Lena never married, never took a mate, and that Elena is Covenant’s daughter. In that same moment, she drops her robe and offers herself to him. Covenant is horrified and disgusted. But he realizes that he has developed a fatherly fondness for the young woman who is his daughter.

Finally, the party arrives at Earthroot, a deep underground river beneath Melenkurion Skyweir. There, Amok reveals the nature of Kevin’s seventh ward. It is the power of command. It was an earth power Kevin did not dare use, even in his despair before invoking the Ritual of Desecration because of its deadly power.

Excited, Elena is determined to use it. Despite Amok’s warning, she drinks deeply of the water at the source of earth power and makes her command. She commands Kevin Landwaster to return from the dead to go forth and slay Lord Foul. She reasons he will be able to redeem himself for his earlier despair and failure and save the people of the Land.

Kevin arrives and is angry. He tells her not to order him to do it. She knows not what power she will unleash. Determined and desperate, Elena sends him forth.

Kevin returns just moments later, looking like a zombie. Foul easily bested him, he tells Elena, and sent him to destroy her and the Staff of Law. She has violated the law of death, he says, and unleashed an unfathomable evil upon the land. He then advances on her.

Elena’s Bloodguard tries to stop Kevin and is destroyed like a bag of sticks. Elena fights with all her might with the Staff of Law as Bannor and Covenant watch. They fall into a deep cavern. As they fall, Covenant can see the flashes of earth power as they do battle.

The ground around them starts to shake and they get into the boat that delivered them to the cavern to make their escape. They ride rapids and go over falls as the land around them pitches and rolls. Finally, they escape the caverns to the Black River and sale toward the Garroting Deep.

They arrive to find that the Giant has been hanged at the Forrestal’s gallows and his army has been destroyed. Troy is horrified to find out that Elena is dead for he had fallen in love with her. He is bitter because she chose Covenant, a self loathing, bitter man who denied the land over him. Mhorman reminds Troy that the High Lord must still live because Covenant is still in the Land and it was Elena who summoned him.

As he’s venting his anger at Covenant, the Forestal reminds Troy that they had made a bargain where Troy offered to do anything to save his army. The Forestal’s price is Troy’s life. He will not kill Troy, but make Troy a Forestal so he can assist in tending to the Garroting Deep. Slowly, Troy is converted from a human into a plant like creature which is carried off into the forest by Caerroil Wildwood.

As Covenant watches this unfold, he becomes dizzy and begins to fade. Mhoram remarks that the High Lord must be dead for Covenant is disappearing. That is the last thing Covenant hears in the land.

As he fades, he hears a loud buzzing noise. He awakens in his living room. The phone is on the floor, off the hook. The buzzing is the phone. He picks himself up and notices he has cut his head. He goes to the bathroom and sees that he has cut himself down to the bone along the scalp in his fall. Rather than clean the cut, he just stands there, staring at it and believing it to be a mark of his guilt for all of the evil he feels he committed upon the Land and its people.

Usually, the second installment of a trilogy – be it books or movies – is the strongest. When one arrives at the second installment, the characters are established, so there is room for a great deal of plot advancement, new character introductions, and a cliffhanger to lead you into the third installment.

In my reading of Donaldson’s works, I’ve found that his second installments are usually the weakest. There are several shortcomings in this second of three books.

First is the introduction of Hile Troy. A large portion of the book is told from his point of view. Yet, he is under developed and the reader never really comes to care for or despise Troy. Inasmuch as Donaldson masterfully developed the anti hero Thomas Covenant whom we loath for his self pity and bitterness, yet root for because of his core character, Troy is flat and meaningless.

Donaldson puts forth Troy’s jealousy of Covenant and the relationship he enjoys with the High Lord. Jealousy is perhaps the strongest of all motivations. Yet, he does nothing with it. Nor does he make Troy heroic, cowardly, likeable, or despicable. For as large a role as he played in this second book, the reader finds Hile Troy to be an enigma.

A book short on character development ought to have epic battle scenes or something that creates great peril for the heroes. We will come to find out that Elena’s actions have grave consequences. But as this second book ends, Donaldson doesn’t hint at or tantalize the reader with what those consequences will be.

Nor does the book advance Donaldson’s character arc. He leaves the Land in at the end of the second book the same man with the same feelings as he had at the beginning.

Having said that, a trilogy must be judged by the gestalt of the story – not the individual parts. The story in its entirety is compelling and Donaldson has set things into motion that will make the third installment riveting. I know this because I’ve read the books before. But I remember putting down the second installment wanting more. I didn’t want more because I was excited to see what was next. I wanted more because I felt The Illearth War was an unsatisfying reading experience.

Tuesday, July 12, 2011

Dragonlance Tales, Volume I The Magic of Krynn


Dragonlance Tales, Volume I
The Magic of Krynn
Edited by Margaret Weiss and Tracy Hickman
Copyright 1987

Riverwind and the Crystal Staff

By Michael Williams

This is a narrative poem telling the life story of Riverwind up until he found the magical blue crystal staff that restored the power of clerics in Krynn.

I don’t evaluate poetry because I have not read enough poetry to know good from bad. I’d rather have read this as a story.

The Blood Sea Monster
By Barbara Siegel and Scott Siegel

An outcast elf flees from a baker from whom he stole a loaf of bread. He hides in a fishing boat and ends up accompanying the fisherman to sea. The fisherman’s goal: to catch the monster that lurks at the center of the maelstrom in the Blood Sea.

This story is so atrociously bad because it breaks a fundamental rule of fictional writing that even high school students know: you can’t write a first person narrative if the narrator dies at the ending. It just doesn’t work. You may think I threw you a spoiler, but I didn’t spoil anything for you. This would be a B- paper for a high school fiction writer.

A Stone’s Throw Away
By Roger E. Moore

Tasslehoff Burrfoot acquires a magic ring that transports him to a citadel of a powerful magician. The magic user imprisons Tasslehoff, determined to acquire the ring, but neither he nor Tasslehoff can remove it from his finger. So the magician summons a demon whom he has enslaved to learn what the ring does and how it can be removed. The demon provides the answer, much to the chagrin of the magic user.

I liked the premise of this tale a lot. The story is well told and true to the Tasslehoff Burrfoot character. However, this guy writes some of the most stilted, silliest dialogue I’ve ever read in print and it hurts the story a great deal.

Dreams of Darkness, Dreams of Light
By Warren B. Smith
William Sweetwater is a short, pig faced man who runs a tavern in a port city occupied by the Draconian army. (in the Dragonlance Chroncles, it is at Pig and Whistle that Raistlin and his troop perform for patrons to raise money). William has heroic dreams of adventure. Real adventure comes his way when his friend, Tom the tailor is capture by the Dragonians. He combines forces with a Minotaur that owns another tavern in town to rescue Tom.

This was a mildly engaging tale with a fair amount of action. I liked the character of William Sweetwater in the Chronicles, so it was pleasant to visit with him again.

Love and Ale
By Nick O’Donohoe
Before the war against the Draconians, the Inn of the Last Home was just another inn in a remote town. Its owner, Otik and his barmaid Tika, brew their own ale, of which Otik is quite proud. But when a kender stops by and spills a little magical dust into the brewing process, the patrons of the Inn of the Last Home become more aggressive and more amorous. . .

This 40 page story was about 20 pages too long. Credit the author for a decent story. Criticize the editors for not lopping 8,000 extraneous words from the text.

Wayward Children
By Richard Knaak

A patrol of Draconians wanders into an uncharted village of elves. They brutalize the town and are determined to occupy it. But they soon find that the town is actually inhabited by their cousins – the dragons, whose eggs were stolen and used to create the Draconian race. The dragons get their revenge for the loss of their children.

This story was well crafted and is the best of the stand alone stories in this collection (not being linked directly to any characters or actions in the original Chronicles). It reveals the origins of the Draconians.

The Test of the Twins
By Margaret Weiss

This tale recounts Raistlin’s test at the Towers of High Sorcery and how he was made to kill his own twin and loving brother to pass that test. Raistlin’s trial and how it left him a physical wreck is frequently mentioned in the Chronicles, but never fully told. Here it is, wonderfully told by one of the architects of the series.

This is one of the stories left untold in the Chronicles that begged for at least a novella, if not a full blown novel. So much more could have been done with it, but credit Weiss for honing it down and still making it worthwhile reading.

Harvests
By Nancy Varian Berberick

This story is set before the Chronicles takes place. Tanis and Flint are journeying in the mountains when they encounter a young woman determined to find her brother and boyfriend who have been whisked away to the castle of an evil magician determine to harvest the essence of their life to prolong a life. Tanis and Flint risk life and limb to help her find her missing men.

It relies on the handsome heroes helping the distressed maiden cliché, but is a well crafted story nonetheless with a halfway decent twist at the end.

Finding the Faith
Mary Kirchoff

Another of the untold tales of the Chronicles was the journey to Ice Wall to recover the Dragon Orb and Dragonlance. The elf princess, Laurana lead the party that includes Sturm Brightblade and his rival knight, Derek; the cleric of Paladine, Elistan, and Tasslehoff Burrfoot to a remote glacial region. There, they find a false cleric who is willing to aid them in crossing a glacier and entering a cave that is a portal to the home of a magician who keeps the two artifacts. In the end, the party recovers the powerful, magical artifacts to aid in the war against the dragon armies.

I never knew if it was laziness on the writers’ part or bad editing that omitted this story from the chronicles, for it should have been included. I like the narrative device of the old cleric, recounting the tale of how he discovered the true god, Paladine and telling the tale to youngsters. Still, the story comes up short because Tasslehoff Burrfoot appears near the end with the Dragon Orb with no telling of how he acquired it. It seems we’ll never get the full story.

The Legacy
By Margaret Weiss and Tracy Hickman

This novella by the creators of the Dragonlance saga serves as a capstone to the Dragonlance Tales trilogy which I have not yet reviewed. It chronicles the evolution of Raistlin from a great magician of the red robes to a powerful mage of the black robes aspiring to dethrone the Dark Queen herself and take her place as a god.

Raistlin’s twin and his wife Tika have settled down, own and inn, and have raised three boys. Two, Tanin and Sturm, are young warriors with growing reputations. The third, Palin, is a magician. Cameron and the three boys are summoned to the Tower of High Sorcery to learn that there is evidence that Raistlin, supposedly dead in the Abyss, is still alive and searching for a way out. The only person, according to the mages, that can find out for sure, is young Palin. Cameron fights hard to avoid having his son get involved with the tower’s lords and his wayward twin.
Perhaps it is because they are the creators of the world that is Dragonlance that Weiss and Hickman authored what is, by far the best tale in this book. I regret having read it before having reread the Legends series because the Legends Trilogy is as good, if not better than the chronicles and I had forgotten its story and how it ended.

Nonetheless, Weiss and Hickman bring out the best in the characters and the world they created and in the end, provide a twist that the reader doesn’t see coming. For all the fun that Dragonlance is, it contained no clever twists. In this novella, we see Weiss and Hickman have developed their story telling ability even more after the publication of their second trilogy.

In reading this anthology, it is clear that Weiss and Hickman are masters of their domain and others are just pretenders. The Chronicles and the Legends lend themselves to so many tales that could be told and told well. Unfortunately, few of them are told well here.

Saturday, July 2, 2011

Book to Movie: Cujo (1983)


Book to Movie: Cujo (1983)
Screenplay by Don Carlos Dunaway and Lauren Currier
Based on a novel by Stephen King
Directed by Lewis Teague

Watch trailer here:

Stephen King’s Cujo had been on the shelf just a few months when the book was adapted for a short story. Most movies based on King’s books had done well on the big screen and nobody had yet made a truly bad movie based on a King work. It was a natural progression in the early and mid eighties for King novels to go right to the big screen.

Lewis Teague, just having finished directing the Stephen King anthology, Cat’s Eye, was drafted to do King’s dog movie.

Cujo the movie is essentially the same story as Cujo the novel. The screenwriters tinker at the margins of the story to make it better for the visual medium.

In the movie, we are immediately immersed in Donna Trenton’s (scream queen Dee Wallace) affair with Steve Kemp (played by Wallace’s real life husband, Christopher Stone). In the movie’s opening minutes, we see Donna stand up from Kemp’s bed and dress herself. Her visage is grim because of the guilt of the affair. It is here, in Kemp’s studio apartment Donna ends the affair in the movie version.

Kemp and Vic know each other because Vic delivers refinished furniture to the Trenton home. Early on, Vic has no idea there is an affair going on. Later, he spots Donna and Steve arguing outside of his apartment and gets the clue. His suspicions are confirmed when he comes home and finds Kemp in his kitchen, his wife crying, and broken eggs and glass on the floor.

Later, Vic drives off in his vintage Jaguar, leaving his wife in silence, heartbroken. He is off to try to save his business. She is left alone to wallow in guilt and remorse.

Just as in the book, the on evening excursion into town, the Pinto starts up again with its antics. Donna gets the car home and resolves to take it to Camber’s the next day.

Meanwhile, Gary and Joe Camber are getting theirs courtesy of Cujo – no longer the good dog.

The Pinto dies in the driveway. What transpires over the next 30 minutes is some of the most tense – and at times, tedious – movie making ever. Cujo is there to greet Donna and Tad. He is transformed from the fluffy, loveable St. Bernard to an evil looking beast with blood matted fur and a foam slathered face. Cujo tries to attack Donna as she approaches the garage looking for Camber.

Donna and Tad are trapped in the car and Cujo stands guard, waiting for his prey to die a slow death in the Detroit manufactured oven in which they are basting, or a much quicker, but painful death with their entrails dangling from his rabid jaws.

The makeup and effects people were in rare form when they shot the car scene because, even on the coldest winter night, one could not help but feel that stifling, muggy heat of a closed car on a summer day. For me, the viewing was more painful than pleasurable.

Eventually Vic is alarmed when his wife does not answer repeated phone calls. In the novel, his partner, Roger, is sympathetic and worried. In the movie, he’s narcissistic, pleading with Vic to stay and work on the campaign. Vic calls the authorities and heads for home.

Meanwhile, Donna resolves to try for the house. She can’t see Cujo. She doesn’t know where he is, but goes for it anyway. Cujo, lurking out of sight under the front bumper, pounces and bites deeply into her thigh. She barely makes it back to the car. She now is infected with rabies.

She and Tad swelter on. Tad now lives in a heat induced delirium.

Sheriff Bannerman is dispatched to the Camber home and Cujo greets him. They struggle and Bannerman drops his gun. While they struggle, Donna goes for the baseball bat lying off to the side of the car. Cujo and Donna Trenton square off. Tad Trenton’s life hangs in the balance.

Cujo attacks and Donna belts him across the head. He retreats and attacks again and Donna shatters his ribs and breaks the bat. Cujo is battered but not broken. He makes one final lunge. Donna thrusts the splintered handle of the bat upward, impaling Cujo on the wood. His teeth snap at her, just inches from her face. Then he fades. . .

She grabs Bannerman’s gun and breaks out the window of the house to let herself inside. She carries Tad in and starts showering him with cool water and trying to breathe life into him. Just as Tad responds, Cujo lunges through the window, making one last stab from Hell’s hot. Donna dispatches him with a bullet.

Just as this transpires, Vic shows up for a happy family reunion. There the movie ends.

I did care for this movie any more than I liked the book, but for different reasons. None of them have anything to do with the quality of the film. Dunaway and Currier did an excellent job of adapting King’s book to the screen and making the story work. Teague certainly created tension in his movie and the entire cast was solid.

I didn’t like the movie because it made me uncomfortable. I don’t mean it made me squeamish violated my core values. It made me physically uncomfortable. I felt as if I were dying of heat prostration just watching the last 30 minutes. The film left me feeling physically and emotionally exhausted. Perhaps that is a compliment to how well Teague directed the film. But I have no need to see this movie again.

The movie was well received upon its release in 1983, but it only rates 5.8 stars on IMDB. Perhaps it was more enjoyable viewing in the theater. Perhaps the casual viewer who didn't make a conscious effort to go to the theater and see it liked it less. For whatever reason, the movie's reputation has waned over time.

The obvious difference between book and movie is that Tad lives instead of dies. King fans may complain. Stephen King may complain (he did). But it had to be that way. Book readers are a different lot than movie goers. I didn’t care for Tad’s death in the book, but it works in literature. Unhappy endings work more often in books than in movies. Had Tad died, all those who went to see the movie and endured all that tension would have received no reward; no happy ending. After taking viewers through 30 minutes of mental anguish, there was no way Teague could have killed off Tad without movie goers being angry.

It was this movie rather than the book that injected the name, "Cujo" into our cultural lexicon. The name Cujo instantly stirs images of vicious dogs in the minds of people who’ve never read a King book and shun horror movies. Such was the impact of this movie.

There are those who enjoy movies where the tension is steady and long. I’m not one of them. I hesitate recommending this movie for that reason. If you are someone that does enjoy that kind of movie. Teague delivers a first rate motion picture.